Hello readers
In Miss McLeod writing group we are writing a poem about someone
I hope you like it
Thursday, August 26, 2021
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Hi Ruby,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing the poem you have made about your grandad. I am sure he is going to love it.
I like the pictures that you have added to your poem.
I look forward to reading your next blog post.
Miss Lauder 🌸
Hi Ruby, thanks for sharing your poem about your grandad. The part about this that made me laugh was that he doesn't like prawns- I think they're gross too!
ReplyDeleteNext time perhaps you can give your readers more information about why we were doing this task. Can you maybe go back and add some now?
Miss McLeod
Thank you Miss Mcleod ,
ReplyDeleteNext time i wright a poem i will do that !!